Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Personal Bios (Comment on this post)

Personal Bios (Comment on this post)

3 comments:

  1. how is this? Spelling and all: Jennifer Traxler had fallen in the abyss of school and is crawling out with a couple of degrees. Her design is greatly influenced but her extensive knowledge of the Graphic Communications Industry. She likes t...o think of her self as an outspoken creative solution specialist. She sees design and print moving more toward personalization and customization to and almost creepy amount of detail and is excited about it. She refines her design like a 4 color press out of register get out get out the loop and make adjustments.

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  2. jen, if you were looking for a grammar critique...

    "fallen in" works just fine, but personally, i would put "fallen into"
    "greatly influenced BY her extensive..."
    replace "t...o" with "to"
    herself is one word
    "customization to AN almost..."
    "get out get out" repetition in last sentence. i also do not get the last phrase... its like a fragment or something.

    hope this helps!

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  3. Jennifer Traxler had fallen into the abyss of school and is crawling out with a couple of degrees. Her design is greatly influenced by her extensive knowledge of the Graphic Communications Industry. She likes to think of her self as an outspoken creative solution specialist. She sees design and print moving more toward personalization and customization to an almost creepy amount of detail and is excited about it. She refines her design like a 4 color press out of register, get out the loop and make adjustments.


    Fixed thank you!!!

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